Comments on: In the beginning… http://www.ninc.com/blog/index.php/archives/in-the-beginning The international organization of multi-published novelists Wed, 22 May 2013 01:08:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 By: nikkie http://www.ninc.com/blog/index.php/archives/in-the-beginning/comment-page-1#comment-2558 nikkie Fri, 30 Jan 2009 05:40:05 +0000 http://www.ninc.com/blog/?p=1639#comment-2558 Hey,

Thanks for the information i wasn’t sure if i was headed in the right direction or not with the two books I’m writing ones a short story about a girl who got married to the wrong guy and just got a divorce while the others a sci-fi book that I need help on. i don’t think the introduction has enough impact the really grab the reader. since this is going to be the first time I’m going to try and get published i was wondering inf you didn’t mind could you read the first chapter and tell me what you think of both books. everyone who has read it if a friend so i don’t know if they are being objective or nice. you i don’t know and have written many book before. so, I you could find the time to help me get on the right track i would be most grateful.

]]> By: J.C. Wilder http://www.ninc.com/blog/index.php/archives/in-the-beginning/comment-page-1#comment-2461 J.C. Wilder Sun, 21 Dec 2008 15:20:43 +0000 http://www.ninc.com/blog/?p=1639#comment-2461 Me too. I love it when a writer grabs my imagination and won’t let go. :)

]]> By: Estella http://www.ninc.com/blog/index.php/archives/in-the-beginning/comment-page-1#comment-2457 Estella Sat, 20 Dec 2008 20:33:06 +0000 http://www.ninc.com/blog/?p=1639#comment-2457 I love books that have great hooks!

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